The 11th Annual Halloweensie Writing Contest is here!!! Susanna Hill runs several fun kidlit micro-fiction contests, and Halloweensie is no exception. This year's essential info:
THE JIMJAM by Carrie Karnes-Fannin Black licorice, two bruised apples, a toothbrush… What kind of neighborhood is this?!? “Guys! C’mon, c’mon…one more.” Your friends shrug. They peel off, their glow-in-the-dark buckets heavy with full-sized goodies. Even your goosebumps have goosebumps in the shivery October air. You trudge on. Under a broken streetlight, on a shadowed street, the house waits. It gives you heebie-jeebies...the willies… the jimjams. You mutter, “I wouldn’t live here as a ghost,” Still… you knock. It opens-- empty, wide. “Oh, aren’t you a sweetie?” A nothing beckons. “Come! We’ll fill that bag right up.” No treats for you tonight-- you’re tricked.
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Halsey, Kathy
10/29/2021 07:07:27 am
I love the idea of a meh trick-or-treat and the ending let's me use my imagination to imagine e the worse. My goosebumps have gooseumps.
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10/29/2021 08:41:43 am
Thank you for stopping by & reading, Kathy! Halloween stories are such creepy fun to write.
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10/29/2021 10:52:38 am
Ooo! The treats really took me back to weird stuff I found in my bucket years ago. Happy Halloween, Carrie!
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Carrie Karnes-Fannin
10/29/2021 11:13:51 am
You know, I never went trick or treating as a kid. Took my daughter once, but that’s it. But I’ve heard about these random items people give as treats. LOL. I can imagine it would be a real drag to get apples or a toothbrush.
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Allison Strick
10/29/2021 12:54:05 pm
Oooo, should’ve quit while they were ahead! So spooky—well done!
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Kari Gonzalez
10/29/2021 06:26:29 pm
Ohhh, Carrie! This story gave me goosebumps on my goosebumps! Someone’s getting a treat…just not the MC! Great story!
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Carrie Karnes-Fannin
10/30/2021 05:07:47 pm
Thanks, Kari!
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