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2nd Annual Kids' Choice Kidlit Contest

1/26/2023

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My first writing contest entry of 2023 is officially in the books! And it's such a fun contest, too. 200 words max, with picture book, middle grade, and young adult categories. I love that this kidlit contest has kids--our actual readers-- as the judges. How perfect is that?

​(Check out the details and entries here. https://www.kaileipewbooks.com/post/the-second-annual-kids-choice-kidlit-writing-contest-is-open)
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A quick note about my entry: this story idea was inspired by a quote I came across recently:

“Then may I tell you that the very next words I read were these – ‘Chloe liked Olivia…’ Do not start. Do not blush. Let us admit in the privacy of our own society that these things sometimes happen. Sometimes women do like women.” - Virginia Woolf, A ROOM OF ONE'S OWN)


The Trouble with Chloe and Olivia
by
Carrie Karnes-Fannin

Word Count
: 195

Age Group: YA

My secondhand sneakers are scuffed. A splotch over the left toe resembles that old mystery director, Alfred Hitchcock.

Or maybe my grandfather.

Grandpa loves Hitchcock movies. While I’d never tell him this, I think it’s because he looks like Hitchcock. I’ve had time to study the Grandpa/Hitchcock stain since I’ve spent all morning avoiding this school...avoiding these new kids.

Only that isn’t right. They aren’t new—I am.

Two sparkly white tennis shoes and a pair of cowboy boots are ahead of me in line. I notice mud clinging to worn boot heels. Then they’re both turning...turning...turning toward me.

“Hey, what’s your name?”

It’s Tennis Shoes. Unicorn socks show above her double-knotted shoelaces. Her voice is low and musical. A leading lady’s voice.

I try to look up...to reply, “Chloe.”

My fingers twitch, longing for my camera. Why was everything easier behind a lens? My red canvas-covered right foot covers Hitchcock as my stomach flips. The smell of burnt fries and spoiled milk wafting through the cafeteria isn’t helping.

Even Alfred Hitchcock couldn’t solve the mystery of making friends here.

“Come on, Olivia,” Cowboy Boots says. “She’s weird.”

They go away.
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