I don't know how well I did with the story arc aspect. But even so, I had fun with this little piece, which is a love letter to newer parents everywhere. What do you think? Drop a note and let me know in the comments if you relate to this one. Thanks for reading! Baby's First Valentine by Carrie Karnes-Fannin You might not believe this right now... You might not feel it, with my small, sticky hand flung across your face, with just one hour left to sleep. You might be pressed to imagine this as you discover the two bites I took from the very last piece of double-chocolate pie. You might not see it, while you scrub those knee-high crayon marks from the bathroom wall. You might not believe this right now, but... ...I love you.
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Deanne Wallace
2/12/2023 09:35:58 am
I adore this story. It evoked fond feelings about when I was my babies’ first Valentine.
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Carrie Suzanne Karnes-Fannin
2/12/2023 10:35:18 am
Awww, thanks Deanne.
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Elizabeth Volkmann
2/12/2023 10:11:18 am
Carrie,
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Carrie Suzanne Karnes-Fannin
2/12/2023 10:34:57 am
Thank you, Beth! I always appreciate your support.
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2/12/2023 10:13:12 am
Aww! Beautiful job, Carrie! I remember that stage all too well, and you captured it in a lovely way.
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Carrie Suzanne Karnes-Fannin
2/12/2023 10:36:37 am
Thank you, Christine! It's hard to believe when you're so tired and sleep deprived that you're practically staggering that someday these will be the best memories. I'm glad you liked it!
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Marjory
2/12/2023 10:43:47 am
The small, sticky hand! 😭 I can feel it!
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Carrie Suzanne Karnes-Fannin
2/12/2023 10:45:40 am
I know, right?!? Every parent has probably woken up to that at least once.
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2/12/2023 03:25:15 pm
Just gorgeous, Carrie. You're SO good at evoking powerful emotions with an economy of words. And it's so true, everything you're conveying here, as I feel the ache of my only child away at college and I think back on those precious early days...
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Carrie Suzanne Karnes-Fannin
2/12/2023 03:42:13 pm
Thank you so much, Elisa! They grow up far too fast.
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Catrine Kyster
2/13/2023 02:33:28 pm
It's so sweet!!!
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Steena Hernandez
2/13/2023 06:40:54 pm
I adore this, and the sweet illustration too! Great job, Carrie!
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2/14/2023 07:39:37 am
Thank you, Steena! I'm glad you like it.
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